Comments on: ch.3, pg.16: “Well…”

By: Heather

Heather — Sat, 15 Sep 2012 14:56:19 +0000

I love Goldy’s opening line. XD

By: Marcus

Marcus — Thu, 13 Sep 2012 09:53:42 +0000

I got to say I didn’t expect the mission to go bad that soon. :(

By: Wisknort

Wisknort — Thu, 13 Sep 2012 09:03:51 +0000

The biggest confusion for me, is that as far as I could tell, when Dorothy was fishing Velvy out, the camera kept spinning around.

By: Jade Griffin

Jade Griffin — Thu, 13 Sep 2012 07:23:08 +0000

This chapter will deal with a segment of night-time action. It takes me about 4 hours to do the strip as you see it above but it doesn’t look right to add a shadow on the ground and not on the characters. I used to shade everything but stopped because it added time to producing the strips and no one mentioned not seeing it anymore. It may take me longer to do the next few scenes if they are external shots, i.e. outside, and I apologize in advance if this delays any strips. I’m just trying to get it to look right. Maybe that’s why some were having issues with what was happening where in the last few strips and I want to clear that up if I can.